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Damn girl, I was expecting a simple moon poem but everything you write these days has such depth. i like how you closed it with an upbeat stanza on we are never alone and it reminded me of an an early and simple WUTM tanka of mine:

"I talk to the moon

walking under moon-lit sky

No matter how cold

I can always layer up

My companion moon-shadow"

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Marcus aka Gregory Maidman
Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Written by Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Living 17,043rd human life. I am Marcus (universal name) or you may call me Greg; a deep thinker; an explorer of ideas and the mind.

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