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Go beyond what stupid Grammarly says. Anytime one uses any conjugate of "to be" in conjunction with a verb as opposed to an adjective or a noun, that presents an avoidable passive voice and an opportunity to edit. You may edit your story post publication (l am an Illumination Integrated Publications editor). Then you will have set an example for other writers and hone your craft.

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Marcus aka Gregory Maidman
Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Written by Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Living 17,043rd human life. I am Marcus (universal name) or you may call me Greg; a deep thinker; an explorer of ideas and the mind.

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