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Great ABAB quatrain. Now you just need to shave some syllables here and there for 10 per line, 2 more such quatrains with CDCD, EFEF and then a GG couplet, and you'll have a sonnet

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Marcus aka Gregory Maidman
Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Written by Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Living 17,043rd human life. I am Marcus (universal name) or you may call me Greg; a deep thinker; an explorer of ideas and the mind.

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