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I also note and love that the paragraph uses only active voice. Passive voice, not adverbs (Stephen King) fills the cemetery where good writing goes to die.

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Marcus aka Gregory Maidman
Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Written by Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Living 17,043rd human life. I am Marcus (universal name) or you may call me Greg; a deep thinker; an explorer of ideas and the mind.

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