I am not surprised by the comments from Thomas and Lucy. When I clicked into your story I was very interested in what you would have to say but figured it would fall short of a proof as certain things cannot be proved. I know free will exists but I would never think that I could prove it. Some would say that personality is a factor of DNA and thus the choices made are not the product of free will but biology. I am not saying that for myself but simply to show why someone will always find a flaw in the offered proof.