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I once advised a mentee, don't tell the reader that the character is scared. Describe what people seeing the character would observe through their senses to realize that the character is scared.

I don't write fiction but as a reader of fiction I was able to deliver that advice.

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Marcus aka Gregory Maidman
Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Written by Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Living 17,043rd human life. I am Marcus (universal name) or you may call me Greg; a deep thinker; an explorer of ideas and the mind.

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