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I suggest that you alter your writing style a bit, if possible. I think I understand why a reader in the other piece of yours I read asked you about AI.

Especially when writing about authenticity, it would be good to include an authentic piece of yourself. A listicle, which this reads like, should at least include an example of how you apply the advice to your own life.

Early in my Medium writing I came upon this advice: "To write as you not you telling another person. Use I/me instead of using you/we/our/us." I once said to a mentee, “I urge you to start writing in the first person and stop with the shallow instructional video type of spiritual writing.” I expanded my thoughts on all this in this essay: https://medium.com/technical-excellence/please-stop-telling-readers-what-to-do-918d7adf128f

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Marcus aka Gregory Maidman
Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Written by Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Living 17,043rd human life. I am Marcus (universal name) or you may call me Greg; a deep thinker; an explorer of ideas and the mind.

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