I suggest you stop using we. You don't speak for me. Tell your stories in the first person and give personal details. Then your stories may be impactful. This is my opinion. Lots of writers write the way you do, and you all would do better to change. "I urge you to start writing in the first person and stop with the shallow instructional video type of spiritual writing.” https://medium.com/technical-excellence/please-stop-telling-readers-what-to-do-918d7adf128f