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I think all of your haiku are good. I honestly don't know about stresses, or beats, which come into play in sonnets (iambic pentameter) which I just ignore in favor of syllable count (10 per line). A true expert you might consult is Ravyne Hawke.

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Marcus aka Gregory Maidman
Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Written by Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Living 17,043rd human life. I am Marcus (universal name) or you may call me Greg; a deep thinker; an explorer of ideas and the mind.

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