It's an excellent poem that I know has much personal meaning for you. I'm glad you provided the backstory for others.

I remember Rama saying to me in a channeled session in early 2021 “think of your earliest memory or picture of yourself. That is very much who you are now.” I just checked and much to my surprise it seems you haven't seen the tanka I wrote a few months later with the picture of about one-year-old or younger me sitting in the bath tub, https://medium.com/know-thyself-heal-thyself/embracing-my-inner-child-a23ffdd1b09f