Loved this introspective poem that set on the precipice of passing to the other side of existence. These lines I highlighted are very true. My rondeau poem about a sailor, https://medium.com/write-under-the-moon/oh-soulful-mariner-51e5136226d8, which I see now you did already enjoy, started with these two lines:
"Born enslaved with trappings of advantage
Handsome wealthy white male privilege"
which harkened back to a tanka I had written in April 2021:
"Incarnate handsome
Book-smart wealthy privileged
Behind these 8-balls
Face yours and others’ demons
Emerge confident and Light"
If you or any other reader is interested in the thoughts behind the poem, https://medium.com/know-thyself-heal-thyself/the-lesson-plan-d1f468b4b394