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Loved this introspective poem that set on the precipice of passing to the other side of existence. These lines I highlighted are very true. My rondeau poem about a sailor, https://medium.com/write-under-the-moon/oh-soulful-mariner-51e5136226d8, which I see now you did already enjoy, started with these two lines:

"Born enslaved with trappings of advantage

Handsome wealthy white male privilege"

which harkened back to a tanka I had written in April 2021:

"Incarnate handsome

Book-smart wealthy privileged

Behind these 8-balls

Face yours and others’ demons

Emerge confident and Light"

If you or any other reader is interested in the thoughts behind the poem, https://medium.com/know-thyself-heal-thyself/the-lesson-plan-d1f468b4b394

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Marcus aka Gregory Maidman
Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Written by Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Living 17,043rd human life. I am Marcus (universal name) or you may call me Greg; a deep thinker; an explorer of ideas and the mind.

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