never mind the below--i scrolled down farther and saw the comment section and left one. Now, constructive criticism--I frown on the tendency of writers to write in the 2nd person--instead of we need to--I did this and this is how and why it worked for me--that is just as strong and leads by example instead of telling the reader what to do. https://medium.com/technical-excellence/please-stop-telling-readers-what-to-do-918d7adf128f