Thanks Kim. It is also a very different voice than I have ever previously written in and afterward I questioned whether I should have submitted it elsewhere, but while it is objectively erotic, I did not write it to cause anyone arousal. I just see it as an open and honest expression of the layers of human sexuality and its relationship to love, which as I think about it now, should be discussed more openly than it is. All that being said, as I had Lindsey/Sitara in mind while writing it, I may have subconsciously imparted much sexual energy that imprinted in the words.