Very clever weaving with lots to say, Dave. This was at the top of my feed just now. I don't know that I've ever seen you in my feed before, universe signaling to me to read it.

The freed from religion part, freeing both humans and God, was the most excellent part of this adventure. I think you'll appreciate this that I published four years and three days before your publication date: https://medium.com/illumination/why-is-it-so-easy-for-people-to-believe-the-most-obvious-lies-yet-require-proof-of-god-339a2a07cc4f

On a note somewhat related to other parts of the poem and commentary, I think you'll appreciate my latest: No One Escapes War Unscathed https://medium.com/paper-poetry/no-one-escapes-war-unscathed-bf3c939705ec