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While I don't have specific memories of your previous work, this stands out to me as your best ever. The first stanza, especially with the feature image, but even without it, paints a picture of the writer contemplating her life, where it's been and where it may go. The second stanza perfectly captures the small details of nature that we can notice in moments like these. The lines I highlighted in the other stanzas tie it all together.

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Marcus aka Gregory Maidman
Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Written by Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Living 17,043rd human life. I am Marcus (universal name) or you may call me Greg; a deep thinker; an explorer of ideas and the mind.

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